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3. 本月3次
AA :The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper. “The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”
“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.” (52)(兩個(gè)版本,此為較新版本)
提供觀點(diǎn):
1. 作者所給出的所有問題和商場的建設(shè)都是時(shí)間上的前后關(guān)系而沒有給出證據(jù)顯示他們的因果關(guān)系
2. 作者只給出了不好的結(jié)果而沒有給出好的影響很可能權(quán)衡利弊之后被選擇的是要開這個(gè)商場
3. 這個(gè)商場的建立不應(yīng)該也不能由此就否定以后所有的商場的建立
1, To begin with, the author fails to establish the causal relationship between the shopping mall&aposs opening and the closing of local businesses.
2, Moreover, the author&aposs conclusion is also based on the assumption that the shopping mall has caused the increase in crime and vagrancy.
3, Finally, even if the shopping mall did cause the closing of local business and the increasing crime and vagrancy in Oak City, the author&aposs prediction that Elm City will suffer from the same fate as Oak City is still open to doubt.
北美范文:
(此文根據(jù)老題寫作)In this editorial the author rebukes Oak City for allowing the construction of a new downtown shopping mall. Citing a number of problems that have occurred since the building of the mail, the author concludes that the residents of Oak City have not benited from the mail and that Oak City exercised poor judgment in allowing the mail to be built. Among the problems cited by the author are the closure of local businesses, lack of parking in the downtown area, and increased trash and litter in a city park near the mall. Moreover, the author argues that profits derived from sales are not beniting Oak City because the owner of the mall lives in another city. The author’s argument is problematic in several respects.
In the first place, the author assumes that addition of the new mall is the cause of the various problems cited. The only evidence offered to support this claim is that the construction of the mall occurred bore these problems manifested themselves. However, this evidence is insufficient to establish the claim in question. A chronological relationship is only one of the indicators of a causal relationship between two events.
In the second place, the author has focused only on negative fects the mall has had on the city. A more detailed analysis of the situation might reveal that the positive benits for the city far outweigh the problems on which the author focuses. For example, new jobs might have been created for the residents of Oak City, and tax revenues might have been increased for the city. Lacking a more comprehensive analysis of the impact of the mail on Oak City, it is presumptuous on the part of the author to conclude that Oak City’s decision to allow the mall to be built was incorrect.
In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to demonstrate that the construction of the mall caused the various problems mentioned. The author would also have to show that the negative fects of the project outweighed the positive fects.
4. 本月2次
local clothing store做的調(diào)查 說8到10月的平均銷售額下降了 而與此同時(shí)家具的銷售額增加了 由此得出消費(fèi)者更想買家具而不是衣服的趨勢 為了利用這個(gè)趨勢 應(yīng)該縮小clothing department而enlarge furnishing department
上月機(jī)經(jīng) 10次
一個(gè)調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)商場的衣帽部在八月到十一月的利潤下降,但是同時(shí),家具部的利潤在上升,為了提高利潤,應(yīng)該減少衣帽部的面積提高家具部的面積
“Local clothing stores reported that their profits decreased, on average, for the three-month period between August 1 and October 31. Stores that sell products for the home reported that, on average, their profits increased during this same period. Clearly, consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing. To take advantage of this trend, we should reduce the size of our clothing departments and enlarge our home furnishings and household products departments.”(70或71,版本不同)
提供觀點(diǎn):
1、衣帽部利潤↓和家具部利潤↑同時(shí)發(fā)生但不一定有必然聯(lián)系
2、三個(gè)月的時(shí)間太短不能用來得出結(jié)論
3、過去的趨勢不一定能保證未來走向
4、樣本不具有代表性
1、A period of three month is too short to draw a general conclusion of the overall trend.
2、The past three months&apos trend does not guarantee the same in the future.
3、Whether the reports from the local clothing stores and stores that sell products for the home are reliable or not are still open to doubt, thus making the author&aposs suggestion groundless.
來自北美范文:
Based upon sales reports over a three-month period that indicate an increase in profits for stores that sell products for the home and a decrease in profits for clothing stores, the business manager of a department store concludes that consumers are choosing to purchase home furnishings rather than clothing. On the basis of this conclusion, the manager recommends a reduction in the size of the clothing department and an increase in the size of the home-furnishings department. This recommendation is problematic in two critical respects.
In the first place, the author’s conclusion that consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing is based upon too small a sample. Data gathered from a three-month period is insufficient to establish the conclusion drawn from it. It is quite possible that the three-month period chosen is idiosyncratic and not representative of entire year’s sales. If so, reducing the size of the clothing departments and enlarging the home-furnishings departments may be a costly mistake.
In the second place, the data collected during the three month period may be biased. The fact that the data rlects sales in local stores is cause for concern. It is possible that the sales trend in a particular location is not representative of sales in other regions. For example, sales of clothing in Florida during the winter months are likely to be quite different from sales of clothing in Alaska during the same period.
In conclusion, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. A more convincing argument must provide additional sales data, collected at different periods of the year and at different locations, that substantiates the trend in question.以上澳際留學(xué)為大家收集整理發(fā)布2011年GMAT機(jī)經(jīng),以上2011年5月GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng),AA篇,2011年5月3日至2011年5月11日,共36題。澳際留學(xué)祝同學(xué)們考試順利!
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3. 本月3次
AA :The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper. “The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”
“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.” (52)(兩個(gè)版本,此為較新版本) 上12345678下
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