gmat機(jī)經(jīng),7-8月gmat作文機(jī)經(jīng)AA(至7.31)(三).

　　以下澳際留學(xué)更新2011gmat機(jī)經(jīng)，以下2011年7月-8月gmat作文機(jī)經(jīng)更新，AA，7月28日至7月30日，共26題。希望大家的gmat考試順利!

5. 有個(gè)生產(chǎn)褲子、衣服的公司sold by various retail outlets，因?yàn)?年以來(lái)效益都很好，決定自己開(kāi)125家retail stores。并且他的CEO是一個(gè) rock star，有影響力，所以這個(gè)公司一定會(huì)成功，因此建議員工都來(lái)買公司的股票。

沒(méi)有原題，考古

V1說(shuō)的是有一個(gè)服裝品牌面向的客戶主要是年輕人，原來(lái)這個(gè)品牌都在一些折扣店里經(jīng)營(yíng)。最近這個(gè)品牌決定在全國(guó)開(kāi)設(shè)自己的專賣店，評(píng)論認(rèn)為將會(huì)取得很好的銷量因?yàn)檫@個(gè)品牌的CEO曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)rock star

V2. Crow’s head company什么的 五年前衣服銷量不錯(cuò) 打算再開(kāi)125家分店什么的。。然后說(shuō)顧客一定會(huì)買因?yàn)樗麄兊腃EO是rock star 然后有個(gè)management team pursue expansion 還有個(gè)原因。。失憶了。。。。

我用的是過(guò)去推現(xiàn)在，無(wú)理假設(shè)

V3. 說(shuō)一個(gè)clothes的company 在前4年銷售很不錯(cuò)，所以計(jì)劃自己新開(kāi) 125retail store， 自己管理，然后說(shuō)因?yàn)轭櫩蜁?huì)感覺(jué)到公司在expansion 所以會(huì)來(lái)買，而且ceo of this company is a former rock star，所以相信這個(gè)計(jì)劃會(huì)成功。

攻擊點(diǎn)比較清楚：

1 連續(xù)5年增長(zhǎng)和retail outlets 不代表是hot trend.

2 開(kāi)125家店需要大量投資，現(xiàn)金風(fēng)險(xiǎn)太大，能否收回投資完全沒(méi)把握。

3 former的rock star 是否仍然受歡迎。而且公司目標(biāo)群是youth，以前的fans都會(huì)變大，不再年輕。

提供觀點(diǎn)：

1、過(guò)去5年盈利不保證將來(lái)也會(huì)盈利，新的銷售渠道的建立（改變銷售渠道）可能會(huì)對(duì)銷量產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響

2、不充分：有實(shí)力管理激進(jìn)不能推斷出股東能獲利

3、前搖滾明星有知名度有粉絲，但管理好公司還需要專業(yè)的CEO

4、前搖滾明星不能保證在未來(lái)的一代青年人中一直保持高知名度

6. 用電腦教學(xué)后撤學(xué)率下降而且畢業(yè)生也很優(yōu)秀,所以要加大資金拖入比例來(lái)買電腦

題庫(kù)原題：

14. The following appeared as part of a newspaper editorial.

“Two years ago Nova High School began to use interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects. The school dropout rate declined immediately, and last year’s graduates have reported some impressive achievements in college. In future budgets the school board should use a greater portion of the available funds to buy more computers, and all schools in the district should adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum.”

Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

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Sample essay 1:

The argument that the school board should buy more computers and adopt interactive computer instruction is not entirely logically convincing, since it ignores certain crucial assumptions.

First, the argument assumes that the decline of school dropout and the achievements of last year’s graduates’ results from the adoption of interactive computer instruction. However, there are several reasons why this might not be true. For example, achievements could have been made in other subjects than the ones with interactive computer instruction. Or last years’ graduates might not have been given the interactive computer instruction. Or the decline of the rate of dropout could be attributed to stricter discipline applied last year.

Second, even supposing the Nova High School’s decline of the dropout and last year’s graduates’ achievements benit directly from the usage of interactive computer instruction, the success of the instruction in one school may not ensure the success in other schools. If it does not suit other schools, the instruction will not work.

Finally, even if the decline of the rate of dropout and the achievements of the last year’s graduates’ are the direct results of the interactive computer instruction, we still do not know whether the school can afford to apply the instruction on all the subjects or to all the students. If the school does not have sufficient fund and has to cut budgets on other projects such as the library, the quality of the school’s education will also compromise.

Thus, the argument is not completely sound. The evidence in support of the conclusion that the dropout rate declined and last year’s graduates made impressive achievements does little to prove the conclusion that other schools should use a greater portion of their funds to apply the instruction since it does not address the assumptions I have already raised. Ultimately, the argument might have been strengthened by making it clear that the decline of the dropout rate and the achievements of the graduates are the direct results of interactive computer instruction, that the instruction is also applicable to other schools in the district, and that the instruction is affordable to all the schools in the district.

Sample essay 2:

The editorial recommends that the school board of Nova High spend a greater portion of available funds on the purchase of additional computers and adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum. Two reasons are offered in support of this recommendation. First, the introduction of interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects was immediately followed by a decline in the school dropout rate. Second, last year’s graduates experienced impressive achievements in college. This argument is unconvincing for two reasons.

To begin with, this argument is a classic instance of “after this, therore because of this” reasoning. The mere fact that the introduction of interactive computer instruction preceded the impressive performance of recent graduates and the decline in the dropout rate is insufficient to conclude that it was the cause of these events. Many other factors could bring about these same results. For example, the school may have implemented counseling and training programs that better meet the needs of students who might otherwise leave school to take jobs. In addition, the school may have introduced programs to better prepare students for college.

Secondly, the author assumes that the impressive achievements of last year’s graduates bear some relation to the introduction of interactive computer instruction at Nova High. However, no evidence is offered to support this assumption. Lacking evidence that links the achievements of the recent graduates to the interactive instruction, it is presumptuous to suggest that the computer instruction was in some way responsible for the students’ impressive performance.

　　以上澳際留學(xué)更新2011年gmat機(jī)經(jīng)，以上2011年7月-8月gmat作文機(jī)經(jīng)更新，AA，7月28日至7月30日，共26題。希望大家的gmat考試順利!

　　以下澳際留學(xué)更新2011gmat機(jī)經(jīng)，以下2011年7月-8月gmat作文機(jī)經(jīng)更新，AA，7月28日至7月30日，共26題。希望大家的gmat考試順利!

5. 有個(gè)生產(chǎn)褲子、衣服的公司sold by various retail outlets，因?yàn)?年以來(lái)效益都很好，決定自己開(kāi)125家retail stores。并且他的CEO是一個(gè) rock star，有影響力，所以這個(gè)公司一定會(huì)成功，因此建議員工都來(lái)買公司的股票。

沒(méi)有原題，考古

V1說(shuō)的是有一個(gè)服裝品牌面向的客戶主要是年輕人，原來(lái)這個(gè)品牌都在一些折扣店里經(jīng)營(yíng)。最近這個(gè)品牌決定在全國(guó)開(kāi)設(shè)自己的專賣店，評(píng)論認(rèn)為將會(huì)取得很好的銷量因?yàn)檫@個(gè)品牌的CEO曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)rock star

V2. Crow’s head company什么的 五年前衣服銷量不錯(cuò) 打算再開(kāi)125家分店什么的。。然后說(shuō)顧客一定會(huì)買因?yàn)樗麄兊腃EO是rock star 然后有個(gè)management team pursue expansion 還有個(gè)原因。。失憶了。。。。

我用的是過(guò)去推現(xiàn)在，無(wú)理假設(shè)

V3. 說(shuō)一個(gè)clothes的company 在前4年銷售很不錯(cuò)，所以計(jì)劃自己新開(kāi) 125retail store， 自己管理，然后說(shuō)因?yàn)轭櫩蜁?huì)感覺(jué)到公司在expansion 所以會(huì)來(lái)買，而且ceo of this company is a former rock star，所以相信這個(gè)計(jì)劃會(huì)成功。

攻擊點(diǎn)比較清楚：

1 連續(xù)5年增長(zhǎng)和retail outlets 不代表是hot trend.

2 開(kāi)125家店需要大量投資，現(xiàn)金風(fēng)險(xiǎn)太大，能否收回投資完全沒(méi)把握。

3 former的rock star 是否仍然受歡迎。而且公司目標(biāo)群是youth，以前的fans都會(huì)變大，不再年輕。

提供觀點(diǎn)：

1、過(guò)去5年盈利不保證將來(lái)也會(huì)盈利，新的銷售渠道的建立（改變銷售渠道）可能會(huì)對(duì)銷量產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響

2、不充分：有實(shí)力管理激進(jìn)不能推斷出股東能獲利

3、前搖滾明星有知名度有粉絲，但管理好公司還需要專業(yè)的CEO

4、前搖滾明星不能保證在未來(lái)的一代青年人中一直保持高知名度 上123下

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