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　　1. 吸引畢業(yè)生發(fā)展biotechnology

　　>>> 本月原始

　　V1.： Z城市的MARTINTON鎮(zhèn)關(guān)了實(shí)驗(yàn)室，要提供資金把大學(xué)生吸引過來的那篇。

　　V2. 作文是關(guān)于biotechnology，講的是現(xiàn)在開這個(gè)biotechnology公司 能對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)有好處，這種企業(yè)對(duì)實(shí)驗(yàn)器械和研究人員的要求其高，martinton 開了一個(gè)公司，里面都是大學(xué)生在做，但是后來被關(guān)閉了，since has closed ever since 這句話我沒看太懂，Zaneviles 看上了這個(gè)計(jì)劃，像實(shí)行，問你啥想法。 99%原題，各位練練手

　　>>> 考古

　　V1.： recommendation：zaneville city council to provide financial support to martinton university graduates， attract them to open bio-company in the town。

　　support: 1) biotechnology需要新技術(shù)新研發(fā)，能夠給當(dāng)?shù)貛斫?jīng)濟(jì)效益;2) martinton univ graduates started a successful company in laboratories, BUT CLOSED afterwards.

　　V2. 一個(gè)創(chuàng)業(yè)家做演講游說 Z 市市政府,說 biotechnology company 對(duì)城市的經(jīng)濟(jì)有很大幫助,但是biotechnology company 需要很好的 lab 的條件。隔壁的 M 市就資助了很好的 lab,吸引某某大學(xué)的 graduate 留下創(chuàng)業(yè)。曾經(jīng)有一個(gè) biotech company 創(chuàng)立的非常成功。但是后來 M 市取消了這個(gè)資助。這個(gè)創(chuàng)業(yè)家認(rèn)為這是好機(jī)會(huì) Z 市趕緊資助 lab, 來吸引 graduate 來創(chuàng)業(yè)。

　　V3. 這個(gè)是生化創(chuàng)業(yè)者給v地區(qū)政府的一個(gè)presentation. 一直以來bio-tech 的研究都有助于innovation 并可以促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。martinton 的大學(xué)城就建立了這樣的lab. 不過一般來說lab需要耗費(fèi)許多資金，并且需要高端人才。martinton 大學(xué)城在v的確的附近。最近martintin的lab關(guān)了。這些創(chuàng)業(yè)家認(rèn)為這個(gè)是v的好機(jī)會(huì)并且指出martinton關(guān)這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)室是鼠目寸光。他們指出如果v政府投資扶持生化實(shí)驗(yàn)室，可以推動(dòng)當(dāng)?shù)亟?jīng)濟(jì)。并且吸引martinton大學(xué)城的學(xué)生來工作。

　　V4. : biotechnology is very important to enhance the economy, innovation should be encouraged. so the town paid for laboratories started by local university graduates， but later on the lab was shut. And the statement reckoned this shortsighted. 狗狗里的一篇。

　　V5. 作文考到了 biotechnology company 那篇，z 地要開公司，要 m 的畢業(yè)生來開。因?yàn)?m 之 前開過 lab 還成功了，雖然最后失敗

　　>>> 參考思路

　　V1：狗主找的理由有：1) zaneville 不一定適合發(fā)展biotechnology， 可能地理環(huán)境，經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展側(cè)重不一樣 blabla; 2) 投資biotechnology不一定帶來經(jīng)濟(jì)效益， capital input in construction, R&D, operation maintenance有可能賠錢;3) martinton univ grads 開的公司最后關(guān)了除了經(jīng)濟(jì)因素還有其他原因，比如無法商業(yè)化，application不好，mass production不好，management, business strategy不成熟等等

　　1.無關(guān)類比:別的城市成功不=本市會(huì)成功

　　2.以偏概全:一個(gè) biotech company 成功不代表大部分 company 會(huì)成功

　　3.信息不足:沒有給出 evidence 為什么 M 市取消了這個(gè)資助

　　2. 健身器材和雜志 上月JJ 36

　　V1： 作文：因?yàn)閠he owner of Skyview Newsstand 說bodybuilders use the-state-of-art exercise machines而且這種先進(jìn)的健身器材都賣光了，所有to maximize fitness levels of

　　residents，our community應(yīng)該在健身中心增加這種健身器材

　　>>> 考古原題

　　The following appeared in the letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper.

　　“Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize fitness levels in our town’s residents, we should, therore, equip our new community fitness center with such machines.”

　　>>> 參考思路

　　1. 無根據(jù)假設(shè)：

　　① 買雜志的人是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)報(bào)道上有such machine才買的

　　(雜志賣得好得原因不一定是因?yàn)榭沁@個(gè)機(jī)器，很可能是價(jià)錢便宜，或其他的內(nèi)容吸引讀者。)

　?、谙矚gsuch machine的人一定會(huì)用這個(gè)machine。

　　2.信息不足： 購(gòu)買者未知，可能是這個(gè)machine的廠家自己買的

　　>>> 參考范文

　　In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Muscle Monthly magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: (1) Muscle Monthly contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and (2) Muscle Monthly is a popular magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand. This argument is questionable on two counts.

　　First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using the machines in Muscle Monthly magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising purposes.

　　Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents. This assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness. Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much use to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents.

　　In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness levels of the persons using them.

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