GMAT機(jī)經(jīng)：2017年11月GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)AA（至11.30）（六）.

2010年11月GMAT機(jī)經(jīng)，2010年GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)整理，至11月30日，AA篇，共28篇。澳際留學(xué)祝您考試順利。

26. 出現(xiàn)日期：11.29Marilyn_love

38. The following appeared in the editorial section of a campus newspaper.

“Because occupancy rates for campus housing fell during the last academic year, so did housing revenues. To solve the problem, campus housing officials should reduce the number of available housing units, thereby increasing the occupancy rates. Also, to keep students from choosing to live off-campus, housing officials should lower the rents, thereby increasing demand.”

1， 入住率低可能是因為學(xué)生人數(shù)減少等原因造成的

2， 同時減少供給和降低房費可能會抵消入住率提高而帶來的收入提高效應(yīng)而有余

3， 就算不會完全抵消仍然有其他原因影響收入例如說學(xué)生進(jìn)入后的維修等等。

boosting rental maintenance oppressive seriousness trivailize

1， 忽略他因：單純地說問題所在是rent. 但實際上可能有很多其他的因素：房子的condition, security, cleaning service，noisy surroundings等等。

2， 過去不能推廣到未來：很可能變化了——比如enrollments of students have sharply increased。所以，很可能減少available的數(shù)量可能不是合適的做法。

3， 減少提供的房子，降低房租，很可能導(dǎo)致收入下降。

27. 出現(xiàn)日期：11.29

110. The following appeared as part of a memorandum from the loan department of the Frostbite National Bank.

“We should not approve the business loan application of the local group that wants to open a franchise outlet for the Kool Kone chain of ice cream parlors. Frostbite is known for its cold winters, and cold weather can mean slow ice cream sales. For example, even though Frostbite is a town of 10,000 people, it has only one ice cream spot — the Frigid Cow. Despite the lack of competition, the Frigid Cow’s net revenues fell by 10 percent last winter.” rainey1979

1， The causal relationship between the benit package given to the professional staff and the decline of the profit is not guaranteed by the coincidence that the latter occured just after the latter. Other factors that may contribute to the decline in the profit should also be considered and ruled out.

2， Research and development is a time-consuming process. Two years is not a long enough period to see the result and positive fects.

3， Even if the package is really too high and caused the declne of profit, it is still imprudent to say that the reduced benits package that was in place two years ago will dinitely work.

1. 同時發(fā)生并不代表因果，忽略他因

2. 沒有提供信息，不知道如果不提供這些會不會得到成功培訓(xùn)

3. 即使是省下錢，也不知是否科研，因為可能因為其他原因?qū)е碌睦麧櫹陆怠?（對應(yīng)北美范文 108 Reducing benits at Ready-to-Ware P287）

28. 出現(xiàn)日期：11.29

52. The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper.

“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.” xiaoyuyi

1. 作者所給出的所有問題和商場的建設(shè)都是時間上的前后關(guān)系而沒有給出證據(jù)顯示他們的因果關(guān)系

2. 作者只給出了不好的結(jié)果而沒有給出好的影響很可能權(quán)衡利弊之后被選擇的是要開這個商場

3. 這個商場的建立不應(yīng)該也不能由此就否定以后所有的商場的建立

1， To begin with, the author fails to establish the causal relationship between the shopping mall&aposs opening and the closing of local businesses.

2， Moreover, the author&aposs conclusion is also based on the assumption that the shopping mall has caused the increase in crime and vagrancy.

3， Finally, even if the shopping mall did cause the closing of local business and the increasing crime and vagrancy in Oak City, the author&aposs prediction that Elm City will suffer from the same fate as Oak City is still open to doubt.

(此文根據(jù)老題寫作)In this editorial the author rebukes Oak City for allowing the construction of a new downtown shopping mall. Citing a number of problems that have occurred since the building of the mail, the author concludes that the residents of Oak City have not benited from the mail and that Oak City exercised poor judgment in allowing the mail to be built. Among the problems cited by the author are the closure of local businesses, lack of parking in the downtown area, and increased trash and litter in a city park near the mall. Moreover, the author argues that profits derived from sales are not beniting Oak City because the owner of the mall lives in another city. The author’s argument is problematic in several respects.

In the first place, the author assumes that addition of the new mall is the cause of the various problems cited. The only evidence offered to support this claim is that the construction of the mall occurred bore these problems manifested themselves. However, this evidence is insufficient to establish the claim in question. A chronological relationship is only one of the indicators of a causal relationship between two events.

In the second place, the author has focused only on negative fects the mall has had on the city. A more detailed analysis of the situation might reveal that the positive benits for the city far outweigh the problems on which the author focuses. For example, new jobs might have been created for the residents of Oak City, and tax revenues might have been increased for the city. Lacking a more comprehensive analysis of the impact of the mail on Oak City, it is presumptuous on the part of the author to conclude that Oak City’s decision to allow the mall to be built was incorrect.

In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to demonstrate that the construction of the mall caused the various problems mentioned. The author would also have to show that the negative fects of the project outweighed the positive fects.

2010年11月GMAT機(jī)經(jīng)，2010年GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)整理，至11月30日，AA篇，共28篇。澳際留學(xué)祝您考試順利。

2010年11月GMAT機(jī)經(jīng)，2010年GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng)整理，至11月30日，AA篇，共28篇。澳際留學(xué)祝您考試順利。

26. 出現(xiàn)日期：11.29Marilyn_love

38. The following appeared in the editorial section of a campus newspaper.

“Because occupancy rates for campus housing fell during the last academic year, so did housing revenues. To solve the problem, campus housing officials should reduce the number of available housing units, thereby increasing the occupancy rates. Also, to keep students from choosing to live off-campus, housing officials should lower the rents, thereby increasing demand.”

1， 入住率低可能是因為學(xué)生人數(shù)減少等原因造成的

2， 同時減少供給和降低房費可能會抵消入住率提高而帶來的收入提高效應(yīng)而有余

3， 就算不會完全抵消仍然有其他原因影響收入例如說學(xué)生進(jìn)入后的維修等等。

boosting rental maintenance oppressive seriousness trivailize

1， 忽略他因：單純地說問題所在是rent. 但實際上可能有很多其他的因素：房子的condition, security, cleaning service，noisy surroundings等等。

2， 過去不能推廣到未來：很可能變化了——比如enrollments of students have sharply increased。所以，很可能減少available的數(shù)量可能不是合適的做法。

3， 減少提供的房子，降低房租，很可能導(dǎo)致收入下降。

27. 出現(xiàn)日期：11.29

110. The following appeared as part of a memorandum from the loan department of the Frostbite National Bank.

“We should not approve the business loan application of the local group that wants to open a franchise outlet for the Kool Kone chain of ice cream parlors. Frostbite is known for its cold winters, and cold weather can mean slow ice cream sales. For example, even though Frostbite is a town of 10,000 people, it has only one ice cream spot — the Frigid Cow. Despite the lack of competition, the Frigid Cow’s net revenues fell by 10 percent last winter.” rainey1979

1， The causal relationship between the benit package given to the professional staff and the decline of the profit is not guaranteed by the coincidence that the latter occured just after the latter. Other factors that may contribute to the decline in the profit should also be considered and ruled out.

2， Research and development is a time-consuming process. Two years is not a long enough period to see the result and positive fects.

3， Even if the package is really too high and caused the declne of profit, it is still imprudent to say that the reduced benits package that was in place two years ago will dinitely work.

1. 同時發(fā)生并不代表因果，忽略他因

2. 沒有提供信息，不知道如果不提供這些會不會得到成功培訓(xùn)

3. 即使是省下錢，也不知是否科研，因為可能因為其他原因?qū)е碌睦麧櫹陆怠?（對應(yīng)北美范文 108 Reducing benits at Ready-to-Ware P287）

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