2017年gmat機經(jīng),7月gmat作文機經(jīng)AA(至7.10)(十).

　　澳際留學整理2011年gmat機經(jīng)，以下2011年7月gmat作文機經(jīng)，時間從2011年7月5日至7月10日，AA篇，共24題。祝大家GMAT考試順利!

15.AA：一個clothing department store的經(jīng)理，看到過去8月到10月見，全市所有clothing store平均利潤下降而home product store利潤上升。認為是消費者的消費習慣發(fā)生變化，傾向于買home product而不買clothes。所以認為，他的department store要縮小clothing規(guī)模而擴大home product規(guī)模來take the advantage。

感謝sisiosisi

題庫原題：No.72 the following appeared as part of a recommendation from the business manager of a department store: “Local clothing stores reported that their profits decreased, on average, for the three-month period between August 1 and October 31. Stores that sell products for the home reported that, on average, their profits increased during this same period. Clearly, consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing. To take advantage of this trend, we should reduce the size of our clothing departments and enlarge our home furnishings and household products departments.”

72. 專賣店的商務(wù)經(jīng)理的備忘錄： 本地服裝店報告說從8月1號到10月31號的3個月里他們的平均利潤下降。銷售家庭用品的商店卻報告同期的平均利潤上升。很明顯，顧客正選擇為他們的家里購買用品而不是買衣物。為了利用這個趨勢，我們應(yīng)該縮減我們的服裝部規(guī)模而擴大家庭裝飾和家務(wù)用品部

范文：Based upon sales reports over a three-month period that indicate an increase in profits for stores that sell products for the home and a decrease in profits for clothing stores, the business manager of a department store concludes that consumers are choosing to purchase home furnishings rather than clothing. On the basis of this conclusion, the manager recommends a reduction in the size of the clothing department and an increase in the size of the home-furnishings department. This recommendation is problematic in two critical respects.

In the first place, the author’s conclusion that consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing is based upon too small a sample. Data gathered from a three-month period is insufficient to establish the conclusion drawn from it. It is quite possible that the three-month period chosen is idiosyncratic and not representative of entire year’s sales. If so, reducing the size of the clothing departments and enlarging the home-furnishings departments may be a costly mistake.

In the second place, the data collected during the three month period may be biased. The fact that the data rlects sales in local stores is cause for concern. It is possible that the sales trend in a particular location is not representative of sales in other regions. For example, sales of clothing in Florida during the winter months are likely to be quite different from sales of clothing in Alaska during the same period.

In conclusion, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. A more convincing argument must provide additional sales data, collected at different periods of the year and at different locations, that substantiates the trend in question.

16. AA： No.32“A recent review of the West Cambriavolunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

感謝斑斑JOYCE

提供觀點：

1. 對事故的反映時間誠然是評價服務(wù)質(zhì)量的一個因素但并不是唯一的因素.所以僅僅因為東區(qū)的商業(yè)救護班的反映時間短就認定商業(yè)救護辦的服務(wù)更好是gratuitous的.

2. 就算東區(qū)的商業(yè)班的服務(wù)質(zhì)量更好也并不意味著,西區(qū)用商業(yè)班就會有一樣的成效.因為東西區(qū)的情況是不同的.很可能西區(qū)的志愿者更有服務(wù),獻身意識.

3. 此外除非商業(yè)班收十分昂貴的服務(wù)費用或者有十分多的事故事實這些都是不可能的, 改成商業(yè)是不見得就可以給該鎮(zhèn)增加很多稅收的.所以把這一點作為理由是不正確的.

considerable revenue significant significance consequently consequence ... is insufficient evidence for the claim that this will be the case for ... ambulance-crew proficiency training emergency

1、錯誤類比 兩個城市不一樣，很可能因為西和東的不一樣，比如，路的情況traffic condition。可能東的車輛更好。服務(wù)的態(tài)度更好。 而且沒有說東的志愿情況如何，很可能東的志愿比商業(yè)的快。

2、草率的判斷：就算是商業(yè)的更快，也不一定更好。反映時間不是唯一的因素，有其他——比如服務(wù)的質(zhì)量，態(tài)度，器材等等。

3、另外，除非商業(yè)可以charge considerable fees 或者 accident rate非常高，否則未必帶來可觀的revenue。

1.response time 并不是唯一衡量服務(wù)質(zhì)量的標準 2.West 和East情況不同，不能比較，比如West的交通很差 3.commercial必須要收取一個比較高的fee才能使town得revenue上升，具體數(shù)字未給出

北美范文：

In this argument the author concludes that West Cambria can increase revenues and provide better care to accident victims by disbanding the volunteer ambulance service and hiring a commercial one. The author reasons that this change would yield additional revenues because service fees could be imposed for ambulance use. The author also reasons that the city would provide better service to accident victims because a commercial service would respond more quickly to accidents than a volunteer service would. The author’s argument is flawed in two respects.

To begin with, the author’s plan for raising revenue for West Cambria is questionable. Unless the service fees are considerable or the accident rate is extremely high, it is unlikely that significant revenues will be raised by charging a fee for ambulance use. Consequently, revenue generation is not a good reason to disband the volunteer service and hire a commercial service.

Next, the author’s beli that better patient care would be provided by a commercial ambulance service than by a volunteer service is based on insufficient evidence. The fact that the commercial service in East Cambria has a lower average response time than the volunteer service in West Cambria is insufficient evidence for the claim that this will be the case for all commercial services. Moreover, the author’s recommendation depends upon the assumption that response time to an accident is the only factor that influences patient care. Other pertinent factors—such as ambulance-crew proficiency and training, and emergency equipment—are not considered.

In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that substantial revenue for the town could be raised by charging service fees for ambulance use. Additionally, the author would have to provide more evidence to support the claim that commercial ambulance services provide better patient care than volunteer services.

　　以上澳際留學整理2011年gmat機經(jīng)，2011年7月gmat作文機經(jīng)，2011年7月5日至2011年7月10日，AA篇，共24題。澳際留學祝大家考試順利!

　　澳際留學整理2011年gmat機經(jīng)，以下2011年7月gmat作文機經(jīng)，時間從2011年7月5日至7月10日，AA篇，共24題。祝大家GMAT考試順利!

15.AA：一個clothing department store的經(jīng)理，看到過去8月到10月見，全市所有clothing store平均利潤下降而home product store利潤上升。認為是消費者的消費習慣發(fā)生變化，傾向于買home product而不買clothes。所以認為，他的department store要縮小clothing規(guī)模而擴大home product規(guī)模來take the advantage。

感謝sisiosisi

題庫原題：No.72 the following appeared as part of a recommendation from the business manager of a department store: “Local clothing stores reported that their profits decreased, on average, for the three-month period between August 1 and October 31. Stores that sell products for the home reported that, on average, their profits increased during this same period. Clearly, consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing. To take advantage of this trend, we should reduce the size of our clothing departments and enlarge our home furnishings and household products departments.”

72. 專賣店的商務(wù)經(jīng)理的備忘錄： 本地服裝店報告說從8月1號到10月31號的3個月里他們的平均利潤下降。銷售家庭用品的商店卻報告同期的平均利潤上升。很明顯，顧客正選擇為他們的家里購買用品而不是買衣物。為了利用這個趨勢，我們應(yīng)該縮減我們的服裝部規(guī)模而擴大家庭裝飾和家務(wù)用品部 上1234567下

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