GRE寫(xiě)作：簡(jiǎn)單粗暴寫(xiě)好ARGUMENT.

　　GRE寫(xiě)作對(duì)于國(guó)內(nèi)考生來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)不小的挑戰(zhàn)，中國(guó)人的思維與西方人不同，寫(xiě)文章的方式也不一樣，所以面對(duì)新GRE寫(xiě)作許多人都十分苦惱。下面來(lái)看一下一位過(guò)來(lái)人寫(xiě)好ARGUMENT的GRE寫(xiě)作方法：

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　　我知道好多人都受了擔(dān)心雷同的毒害，一開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備ARGUMENT就開(kāi)始拼命獨(dú)立思考，獨(dú)

　　立創(chuàng)作?？上ё约涸鯓右蔡与x不出是成千上萬(wàn)的G男G女的普通一員。還有那些找到各種

　　美文精選的，都憋著一口氣想弄點(diǎn)兒新奇故事出來(lái)涂抹個(gè)驚艷一筆。結(jié)果到頭來(lái)看著最順眼

　　的還是我這樣的模板。

　　美文一點(diǎn)兒都不美好。所以，遇見(jiàn)一個(gè)還算靠譜順眼的，你就從了吧。

　　真的就是這么回事兒。要么濃妝艷抹，要么簡(jiǎn)單粗暴，猶豫往往意味著更大的傷害。人生經(jīng)

　　不起推敲。

　　當(dāng)然我說(shuō)寫(xiě)“好”ARGUMENT，還是略有夸張的，但我相信按這路子做肯定不會(huì)低分。而

　　我說(shuō)簡(jiǎn)單粗暴就更沒(méi)有錯(cuò)了，那簡(jiǎn)直是人生的哲學(xué)，決不是局限在寫(xiě)作文上。

　　其實(shí)你能安靜下來(lái)看這篇爛文，說(shuō)明你對(duì)待ARGUMENT已經(jīng)很認(rèn)真了，再塌實(shí)下心來(lái)辨

　　別一下，形成自己的意見(jiàn)，就可以了。好的話(huà)你當(dāng)然要改改就用啊。不好就罵唄。不用太擔(dān)

　　心。畢竟簡(jiǎn)單粗暴沒(méi)有錯(cuò)啊。

　　下面我就來(lái)說(shuō)一下。取舍完全由你。我確實(shí)就是用這套路子，作文得到5.5分?？隙ㄊ沁€可

　　以改得更好。世間所有事其實(shí)都講緣分和默契。希望你第一時(shí)間愛(ài)上我的模板。

　　我頃盡所有。模板。邏輯錯(cuò)誤。例子。242題庫(kù)。提綱。

　　這絕對(duì)是我的看家寶貝了，都拿出來(lái)給你啦。對(duì)于ARGUMENT, 我也再無(wú)他言嘍!

　　不可分心旁騖→深呼吸→ARGUMENT來(lái)了→加速

　　模板

　　In this argument, the arguer advocates that [main idea]. Although this argument might seem reasonable

　　at first glance, it is in fact ill-conceived. The reasons are stated as follows.

　　In the first place, the arguer assumes that [fallacy 1]. Although this is entirely possible, the arguer offers

　　no evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption. It is very likely that [reason 1]. An appropriate

　　example is not very far to seek. [example 1]. The arguer&aposs reasoning is dinitely flawed unless the

　　arguer can convince me that these and other possible scenarios are unlikely.

　　In the second place, the arguer assumes that [fallacy 2]. Nevertheless, there is no guarantee that it is

　　necessarily the case, and the arguer does not supply any evidence to confirm this assumption. It is quite

　　possible that [reason 2]. To illustrate this point clearly, let us take a look at the following representative

　　example. [example 2]. Without accounting for and ruling out these and other alternative explanations,

　　the arguer cannot bolster the recommendation.

　　The last but not the least important, even if the evidence turns out to support the foregoing assumptions,

　　the arguer just simply assumes that [fallacy 2]and neither any conclusive scientific evidence nor any

　　anecdotal evidence is provided to affirm this assumption. It is reasonable to doubt that what the arguer

　　assumes will not happen in reality. It is just as possible that [reason 3]. For example, [example 3].To

　　reach the cited conclusion, the arguer must explain either why none of these alternatives is available or

　　why none of them is able to sustain.

　　To sum up, the arguer’s argument mentioned above is not based on valid evidence or sound reasoning,

　　neither of which is dispensable for a conclusive argument. In order to draw a better conclusion, the

　　arguer should reason more convincingly, cite some evidence that is more persuasive, and take every

　　possible consideration into account.

　　模板說(shuō)明

　　呃。。。怎么樣?是不是覺(jué)得這是個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單粗暴的模板呢?沒(méi)有錯(cuò)，我是覺(jué)得很簡(jiǎn)單很粗暴

　　的。你沒(méi)看到我考場(chǎng)上寫(xiě)的ARGUMENT, 我覺(jué)得那個(gè)更白。呃。。。讓人著迷的就是光這

　　個(gè)全是廢話(huà)的模板就已然313字了，再加些簡(jiǎn)單的句型、粗暴的例子……你寫(xiě)不出500

　　字我請(qǐng)你吃飯!食物當(dāng)然也要簡(jiǎn)單粗暴，鮑魚(yú)龍蝦這種低級(jí)的食物就不要吃啦……

　　用這篇簡(jiǎn)單粗暴的模板，在考場(chǎng)上最需要你動(dòng)腦想的就是三個(gè)邏輯錯(cuò)誤。為你贏取時(shí)間。

　　把時(shí)間花在刀刃上。

　　尋找邏輯錯(cuò)誤會(huì)是你復(fù)習(xí)ARGUMENT 的一個(gè)重點(diǎn)。至于每個(gè)邏輯錯(cuò)誤需要提供的

　　example，越簡(jiǎn)單，越粗暴，就越好。原因就是想找一個(gè)有深度、有哲理、讓絕大多數(shù)人

　　都信服的理由太難了，別說(shuō)我們這些外國(guó)考生，就連英美作家都很難在短時(shí)間內(nèi)做到。

　　另一個(gè)原因就是，即使有一個(gè)好理由了，誰(shuí)去看呢?機(jī)器當(dāng)然看不懂了。那人呢?他看

　　了成千上萬(wàn)的文章。你以為就你的觀點(diǎn)好?他什么沒(méi)見(jiàn)過(guò)?而且他還要去看成千上萬(wàn)的

　　文章，哪有時(shí)間去細(xì)讀你的?早晚要簡(jiǎn)單粗暴，并沒(méi)有別的出路。

　　所以就是只要多練只要簡(jiǎn)單粗暴，就能寫(xiě)好ARGUMENT。

　　細(xì)節(jié)技巧

　　·and 前后變換順序

　　·main idea 可以寫(xiě)的長(zhǎng)一些

　　·example 中的話(huà)盡量寫(xiě)多，盡量寫(xiě)細(xì)，盡量寫(xiě)對(duì)，不一定非用for example

　　剩余時(shí)間

　　·檢查拼寫(xiě)

　　·補(bǔ)充首段

　　[main idea]

　　·in order to 好/boost (sagging) profits/improve the economic health

　　·A should emulate B’s measures

　　[補(bǔ)充首段]

　　To bolster the conclusion,

　　the arguer provides the evidence that...,

　　points out that...

　　cites the result of a resent survey that... indicated a prerence for...

　　cites data collected during a recent study, suggesting that ...

　　along with the fact that .../ based onwhich he assumes that ...

　　In addition/Furthermore/Meanwhile,

　　he projects/predicts that

　　邏輯錯(cuò)誤

　　調(diào)查錯(cuò)誤

　　·the sampling of the study is reliable.

　　It is very likely that the experimental and the control groups of the study were not randomly

　　chosen.

　　For example, they are just ... which could not represent a diverse cross section of the

　　population.

　　畫(huà)蛇添足

　　·it is necessary that

　　過(guò)去

　　·be responsible for/contribute to/ give birth to

　　未來(lái)

　　·this trend in... will continue in the future

　　空間變化

　　·the similar strategy will carry a similar result at ...

　　另起爐灶

　　·no course of action other than the proposed one will contribute to the problem.

　　It is just as possible that other proposals might also solve the problem.

　　For example, there are ...

　　負(fù)面影響

　　·there is no possible detrimental fect of...

　　例子

　　核心詞匯

　　such as/ especially if/

　　人口因素

　　·A has experienced a large growth in its population

　　管理因素

　　·imprudent (pricing and distribution) strategies or poor management

　　偶然因素

　　... was an aberration

　　先天因素

　　·... was more relatively healthy/relativelybright than average to begin with.

　　For example, they exercise regularly and eat healthily

　　司機(jī)因素

　　... do not have enough security knowledge in mind or do not keep alert all the time.

　　For example, a large portion of A, who enjoy the feeling of freedom and high speed, are bold and

　　careless, which may be the lurking danger for accidents.

　　時(shí)間因素

　　were traveling during less safe times of the day, such as early in the morning, or during twilight

　　地形因素

　　the geographic features of ... are more conductive to cause accidents.

　　For example, ... has many sharp turns

　　天氣因素

　　poor weather

　　價(jià)格因素

　　the price of... has been cut down in order to tout consumers

　　旅游因素

　　A is a tour resort, so the customers who ... are mainly touristsinstead of local residents.

　　宴會(huì)因素

　　most of the consumption is from the big company’s invitation banquet

　　品牌因素

　　A has some special advantage that B do not have - and that it cannot duplicate in any other types.

　　供求因素

　　Property values are a function of supply and demand.

　　It is at least likely that the demand for housing in the area happens to rocket dramatically due to an

　　influx of major employers.

　　In addition, it is possible that the supply of housing has decreased.

　　競(jìng)爭(zhēng)因素

　　A’s competitive opponent firms and companies move to other cities. (go bankrupt)

　　成本因素

　　the cost for ... may has gone up rapidly, which will have to be included in the retail price of ...

　　市場(chǎng)因素

　　consumption of other similar products have also declined during that time,

　　the amount of which might even exceed that of ...

　　價(jià)格因素

　　the earlier products are prohibitively expensive for most consumers

　　改革因素

　　the university built more laboratories in the pasttwo years, and then, it is obvious that more

　　money would spend on the new projects.

　　教授因素

　　there are too few professors of botanyin the university and the students,

　　although lack of interest, have no choice but to attend Thomas&aposs class

　　必修因素

　　the classes she teaches are requirements for every science student.

　　老師因素

　　the school hired more fective teachers whose outstanding teaching methods contributed to the

　　improvement of……

　　新舊因素

　　... has to update its trucks, which are old and out of service, rather than add to its new...

　　規(guī)模因素

　　the size of the farms has shrinked.

　　For example, a farm which has 30 cows producing more milk than two farms each of which has

　　10 cows.

　　質(zhì)量因素

　　... is not so good, so people are unwilling to go to ... when they ...

　　顧客因素

　　many customers are indeed disgruntled about..., but too busy to take time and fort to formally

　　complain.

　　領(lǐng)導(dǎo)因素

　　college career-planning staff provides students with little information about the current job market.

　　競(jìng)爭(zhēng)因素

　　they have already attended a similar course

　　there are cheaper but highly-qualified products from the formidable opponents/ the surrounding

　　areas coming in the instant future insomuch as these products will tout more customers and make

　　the future’s sales sharply down;

　　習(xí)慣原因

　　the consumer tastes and habits have become so well entrenched that consumers would not be glad

　　to change.

　　流行因素

　　It is well known that the taste of the public especially when it comes to such vogue cases as ...

　　shifts quicker than anyone can imagine. Today’s hot issue may well be in tomorrow’s landfill.

　　Maybe at that time ... are in the fashion due to... other than...

　　個(gè)人因素

　　many unemployed residents are unwilling to go to work if offered the chance, for their handsome

　　welfare can support their families

　　以上就是這位過(guò)來(lái)人的簡(jiǎn)單粗暴寫(xiě)好ARGUMENT的GRE寫(xiě)作方法，希望各位考生看后得到一些啟發(fā)，從而更好地備戰(zhàn)新GRE考試。