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雅思寫作7種高分開頭的寫法.

2017/08/07 11:30:48 編輯: 瀏覽次數(shù):339 移動端

  人們常說一個好的開頭是成功的一半,這句話用到雅思寫作考試上再合適不過了。這是因?yàn)樵谘潘伎荚嚂r,閱卷老師的閱卷時間非常的有限,一個號的作文開頭可以瞬間抓住閱卷員們的視線,給老師留下一個好印象。但是我們在寫作文開頭的時候有沒有例子可尋呢?今天澳際小編為就為大家列出幾種常見的雅思寫作模板開頭,大家可以參考一下。

  1、在寫關(guān)于該不該禁煙的話題時

  中山大學(xué)最近做的一個研究表明,在過去五年里,吸煙人數(shù)急劇上升。研究結(jié)果同時顯示,吸煙導(dǎo)致的疾病發(fā)病率也急劇增長。因此,禁煙成為一個熱點(diǎn)話題。這個開頭通過媒體報道把問題呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前,從而引出吸煙比例急劇上升造成的危害,引發(fā)讀者思考。

  A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.

  2、在寫警察是否應(yīng)該持槍的話題時

  If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police.

  提出這個有爭議的話題,激發(fā)讀者的興趣,使讀者積極參與到討論中來,讓大家各抒己見進(jìn)行討論。

  3、引起讀者興趣的話題

  據(jù)報道,在父親節(jié)那天,珠海有個小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的證據(jù)也顯示,經(jīng)常遭父母或老師虐待的小孩往往比較內(nèi)向、悲觀、冷漠甚至厭世。近來,關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該廢除體罰出現(xiàn)了一場激烈的爭論,老師、家長和專家各執(zhí)一詞。)當(dāng)讀者看到這個話題時產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣進(jìn)而引起了對這件事情的思考。

  It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father‘ Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.

  4、呈現(xiàn)該話題正反方的觀點(diǎn)

  在開頭提出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn),不同的讀者可以根據(jù)自己對問題的看法進(jìn)行思考,從而引發(fā)讀者的探究心理,進(jìn)一步思考這個問題從而得出結(jié)論。At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally form an unrealistic picture of a more peacul world where the sun always shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

  5、引用名人名言、諺語等作為文章的開頭

  例如在寫到先天跟后天哪一個更重要時,“Genius is two percent inspiration and ninety-eight percent perspiration” is the opinion held by Edison. This remark has been confirmed time and again by more and more people.“天才是百分之二的靈感,百分之九十八的汗水”是愛迪生的觀點(diǎn),而且反復(fù)被越來越多的人所證實(shí),通過引用名人名言揭示了文章的主題,為下文很好地做了鋪墊。

  6、對將要討論的話題進(jìn)行定義

  例如在寫到Globalization時,Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas and information-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

  關(guān)于“全球化”這個名詞,考生并不陌生,但是如何用合理的語言來賦予它一個含義,這并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了這一點(diǎn),先是從字面上詮釋了“全球化”的定義,進(jìn)而又從實(shí)際生活角度賦予了它另外一層含義。

  7、追根溯源法

  即從題目給出的話題中找出這個現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因來擴(kuò)展背景句。這種方法適合大多數(shù)的話題。例如There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benits of mobile phone?

  這個題目中給出的話題是mobile phone, 所以考生可以從它產(chǎn)生的原因來考慮,就是科技的繁榮,而科技的繁榮,手機(jī)的廣泛使用是在20世紀(jì)末,這樣背景句就有內(nèi)容可寫了。當(dāng)然要通過相應(yīng)的句型來寫,這個背景句就可以寫成:The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

  再比如另外一道題目:Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?這題要求大家討論大學(xué)是提供職業(yè)技能還是傳授知識。從傳統(tǒng)觀點(diǎn)來看,大學(xué)是傳授知識的地方,為什么會提出要傳授技能呢?所以這里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考一下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大學(xué)就轉(zhuǎn)移到以傳授技能為主了。As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

  以上就是澳際小編為您列舉的關(guān)于作文開頭的雅思寫作范文,大家可以記下這些開頭,說不定什么時候還能用上的,關(guān)于寫作其實(shí)最重要的一點(diǎn)就是思考的角度和語言,大家要想提升自己的雅思寫作,也要從這兩方面入手,多看看范文的切入角度有哪些,借鑒學(xué)習(xí)一下非常有必要。

  一對一的授課非常適合想要快速提分的學(xué)生,它的吸收率比班課更高,排課更為靈活,這意味著用更短的時間達(dá)成目標(biāo)。尤其是想要沖擊高分的學(xué)生,很難在約定俗成的班課上有針對性地彌補(bǔ)短板。老師在一對一的形式下,也能更好地照顧到學(xué)生的需求。以作文批改為例,如果是班課就難以實(shí)現(xiàn),因?yàn)閿?shù)量太多了,費(fèi)時費(fèi)力。但在澳際的一對一授課中,每位學(xué)生都能獲得經(jīng)老師2次修改成文的文章4-6篇。想在25分鐘內(nèi)流暢地寫出500詞以上的文章,沒有這個打磨的過程,談何容易。

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