在學(xué)生平時(shí)的SAT寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中,澳際留學(xué)的老師們通過(guò)長(zhǎng)期的觀察與總結(jié),發(fā)現(xiàn)了6類(lèi)常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題,這是導(dǎo)致學(xué)生在考試中丟分的原因。英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí)中存在很多固定搭配,適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂霉潭ù钆?如固定短語(yǔ))可以使文章表達(dá)流暢、到位,但是學(xué)生在SAT寫(xiě)作中使用的時(shí)候會(huì)出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤,今天我們就來(lái)看SAT寫(xiě)作6類(lèi)常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題之二:固定搭配。
1、 Original: ...there is no deny that a university or college really offers us great enlightment for students future development and growth.
Revised: ... there is no denying that a university diploma really offers great opportunities for student&aposs personal growth.
there is no deny改為固定搭配there is no denying“不可否認(rèn)”。原句中還存在表達(dá)不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題,應(yīng)該是大學(xué)文憑給學(xué)生們的個(gè)人發(fā)展提供了很多機(jī)會(huì)。
2、Original: Modern technologies have improved today&aposs factories technology and brought pollutions to the minimum.
Revised: However, with the modern technology, air and noise pollution can be kept to a minimum.
“降到最低程度”是to a minimum。
3、Original: If you want to catch the pace of the rhythms of the modern world you had better get ready.
Revised: If you want to keep pace with the rhythms of the modern world, you had better get up early.
原句catch up with the pace的搭配是不對(duì)的,如果表述“和現(xiàn)在世界的快節(jié)奏同步”可以用keep pace with(與…同步)或catch up with(趕上…步伐)。
4、 Original: Every year, Lenovo spends a large amount of money to product environment without regret. By doing this, Lenovo makes a profit at the same time.
Revised: Every year Lenovo spends a large amount of money on environmental protection while at the same time makes a profit.
原句中動(dòng)詞spend的詞組搭配不正確,spend可以表示“花費(fèi)錢(qián)或時(shí)間”。常用的搭配有:spend money on sth./sb.表示“在某人或某事上花錢(qián)”;spend time with sb.表示“花時(shí)間和某人在一起”;spend time(in)doing sth. 表示“花時(shí)間做某事”等。另外,原句有些啰嗦,改后稿用while結(jié)構(gòu)省略了一個(gè)句子,使句子更加簡(jiǎn)潔。
5、Original: The advertisement as the news inform us the current technologies of a country.
Revised: The ad informed us of the current technology, solar, available within that country.
“讓某人得知什么消息或事情”,要用inform sb. of sth.,不能直接說(shuō)inform sb. sth.。
6、Original: I do admire those people who trust their first intuition for their courage to follow what their hearts believe.
Revised: I do admire those people who trust their first impressions, for they have the courage to follow their hearts.
“跟著感覺(jué)走”的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)式follow one&aposs heart。
考生應(yīng)在平時(shí)閱讀范文或其他材料時(shí),注意摘錄一些固定搭配,表明他們的用途范圍,并在SAT寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中留意固定搭配。當(dāng)然,記憶一定要準(zhǔn)確,特別要注意固定搭配中所使用的詞性、詞形等。
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